Friday, October 3, 2014

My Name Is John Merrick

my name is John Merrick and today the strangest thing happened today as i was in my chamber. i was doing my usual routine it was a chilly day so i had my coat on and i was sitting by the fireside. i had just finished eating my daily dinner made by Mr. Bytes. the carnival was closed today i think those police men took it down again because of me. everyone always screams in terror when they see me, i wonder what my mother would do if she saw me she would probably scream as well. as i sat by the fire i hear a man walk in he began to talk to Mr. Bytes. then i heard Mr. Bytes giving his speech out from the carnival. at first i thought he was just practicing but then he pulled the curtain and told me to stand up and turn around. there was a man there standing alone looking at my with eyes full of sorrow, i wonder if he cried of fear or if he cried of sadness. i was frightened what if Mr. Bytes bring more people here. i was glad that the carnival had been postponed but will my house be the new carnival?

1 comment:

  1. Well written! You really caught the moment! “…but will my house be the new carnival?” That’s probably just what John was thinking! Good job!

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